ROUGHCUT

merged the sound tract and the footage together for rough cut really really rough... the title page is really good


basic lined paper with writing and doodling that appears around the worlds " in too deep" produced in photo shop.

changes

we changed our story board again ;

its now two girls on the phone in different places, during the conversation one of the girls dares the other to date some guys . getting the gist of rom-com with how the boys are such as

1st boy is weird
2nd boy looks mining
3rd boy is ok and who she wants to date.

first location of the girl is walking along the street the other is in her bedroom relaxing with a laptop and phone.


3 boys are random friends of holly's just pictures but hopefully will advance into moving footage.

story

due to weather conditions our filming and story has to be changed to inside because the rain /snow does not give the desired affect . originally the story was meant to be outside on a green field. changes to the story have been made for it to be inside having tracking shots along the corridors and rooms .