Final piece feedback

Feedback from our final piece:

Strengths: Good background, good title, good pictures, good editing, original background, good use of footage and pictures.

Improvements: Some photos out of focus, end title too long, duck film logo crowns not in sync, film logo needs to be quicker and the end title, opening titles are too slow, some sound out of sync, bad acting, editing could be better as timing was bad.

Target audience: Teenage girls and mothers.